On his knees

He wanted to bring some flowers
But had no idea where to get them
He bought some chocolates in early hours
Ate them on the way in search of some phlegm

He was never a material for that
But something compelled from inside
To say it and end the inner rant
Of love or the hormones that reside

An endless patch of blue, with distant sailing ships
Overlooked by green hills, Covered by the sunset red
Sparkling drops of water rained over her trembling lips
Then, the scene faded and reality hit, stopping him dead

The place was underground, crowded as hell
Empty handed, adjusting to a place to sit
He came on his knees, and said the magic words well
*cough cough cough* was all that came from the git

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15 thoughts on “On his knees

  1. petite poetries and more May 16, 2015 / 8:32 pm

    I had to read it twice to get it into my un thoughtful mind. You’ve described this whole situation so beautifully although he could just ‘come on his knees’.! πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚

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    • Prateek Kohli May 17, 2015 / 9:03 pm

      Your comment made it clear that you have perfectly got what I intended, Archita. I agree with you completely. He could have just done that, but the movies had influenced him badly πŸ˜€

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  2. izza ifzaal May 16, 2015 / 9:31 pm

    This was soo cute & sweet *clears throat * :p

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    • Prateek Kohli May 17, 2015 / 9:05 pm

      Haha truth is stranger than fiction πŸ˜‰ Thank you ! I am glad you found it cute and sweet *wipes of sweat from forehead in relief* πŸ˜€

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      • izza ifzaal May 19, 2015 / 2:55 pm

        Hahaha

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  3. Kritika Vashist May 17, 2015 / 4:17 pm

    An endless patch of blue, with distant sailing ships
    Overlooked by green hills, Covered by the sunset red- These lines are beautiful, seriously!
    Endless patch of blue. ❀

    Loved it!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Prateek Kohli May 17, 2015 / 9:43 pm

      I really feel excited to see a notification from you, Kritika and comments like these are an absolute delight! πŸ™‚
      And well, when a romantic poet likes these lines, that IS encouraging. Thank you so soo much ^_^

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      • Kritika Vashist May 18, 2015 / 5:36 am

        Apni tareef wale post pe Apni he tareef kiya karo. Okay, mister? πŸ˜›
        You sure deserve the appreciation. πŸ™‚

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      • Prateek Kohli May 19, 2015 / 11:53 am

        Haha yes miss ! Shukria dher saara ^_^

        Like

  4. Pooja Mehta May 27, 2015 / 1:01 pm

    The beautiful description, but ended with just coming on his Knees.
    Liked it

    Liked by 1 person

    • Prateek Kohli May 27, 2015 / 8:59 pm

      Thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time to read, Pooja. I am really glad you liked it πŸ™‚

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