Betrayal

Seeing the bright pink petals,
The bee couldn’t resist
Flying in love and joy,
He rushed to the seductive petals

Moments later, exhilarated he danced
Kissed the flower, sucked the nectar
Drowned in pleasure he failed to see
he hadn’t arrived, but was brought

The beautiful petals swiftly began to close
Before he realized the delicious poison started affect
Unable to understand, he gasped for air
Strangled, he cried for help

Yes”,Β said the flower to the betrayed lover
“In the world I was born to kill
With fools like you love never gets over
The dinner is on me, your life will pay the bill”

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23 thoughts on “Betrayal

      • Prateek Kohli June 11, 2016 / 7:44 pm

        The world after 18 which you talked about in your post πŸ˜‰

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      • Shreya Kedia June 11, 2016 / 7:53 pm

        Hahaha. Well said. πŸ˜‰ This world keeps us busy a little too much. But then again. Life is Afterall Beautiful and we meet people like you who bring smile on faces like mine at odd times of the day. πŸ˜›

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  1. cote8050 June 14, 2016 / 12:57 pm

    lovely work, sound like someone I know πŸ™‚ M.

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  2. Pratyusha June 16, 2016 / 2:31 am

    I simply loved it. The transition in your poem is really good !!! πŸ™‚ Waiting to read more !! Will keep revisiting πŸ™‚

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    • Prateek Kohli June 16, 2016 / 2:47 am

      Thank you for the love, Pratyusha! And welcome to the uncertainty principle. It is already looking forward to your revisits πŸ™‚

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      • Pratyusha June 16, 2016 / 3:28 am

        You are welcome πŸ™‚ it would be innocence honour to visit the uncertainty πŸ˜›

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  3. Karthik June 16, 2016 / 6:49 am

    Great piece of writing. The last line was too good πŸ˜€ Looking forward to reading more of your work πŸ™‚

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  4. kratzworld June 18, 2016 / 6:26 am

    It has all the qualities of a perfect poem. πŸ™‚ beautifully expressed. πŸ™‚

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    • Prateek Kohli June 18, 2016 / 10:35 am

      A perfect comment made the poem successful ! Thank you so much, Krati for the lovely words πŸ˜ƒ

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  5. maureenrose7 November 1, 2016 / 1:56 am

    Wow, how perfectly wicked! I love it! Your writing is intense and just outstanding! πŸ™‚

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      • maureenrose7 November 1, 2016 / 2:20 am

        You are Welcome Prateek! Im glad to have found your blog! πŸ™‚

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      • maureenrose7 November 1, 2016 / 2:23 am

        the feeling is mutual! πŸ™‚

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