Tale of 4 liquids

Alcohol touched his lips
Wandered through his throat
Reached inside, making its magic
More came, drowning his liver

Adrenaline rushed into blood
Raced towards everywhere
The effect reached outside, showing its trick
More came, he now picked up his keys

Petrol ignited, flooded the engine
An ego soothing vroom now being heard
Burning inside, it readied its show
More came, now refusing to stop

Blood now crawled where the car was
Brown coloured highway now blushed red
Fleeing from inside, it now ran free
More came, never agreeing to stop

10 thoughts on “Tale of 4 liquids

  1. Kritika Vashist June 17, 2016 / 7:33 pm

    This is amazing, and sad at the same time. The title itself made MA go wow, that you could thought of something like this. Amazingly penned the thought. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Prateek Kohli June 17, 2016 / 10:12 pm

      Hi Kritika ! Thank you!! Super glad that you and aunty both liked it \😃/


  2. preetixd June 23, 2016 / 3:27 pm

    DAMN! This reminded me why are you my favourite!

    Liked by 1 person

      • preetixd July 1, 2016 / 3:33 am

        lol 😛 You have to work for it 😉


  3. Sucheta February 13, 2017 / 3:46 pm

    Woah! Unique and impactful!

    Sell it to the anti – ‘drinking and driving’ ads!

    Liked by 1 person

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