A star twinkles, beautiful they see…
So far, unfathomable by thee…
Closer you go, the fire it burns…
Giving the soothing light…
While its heart and mind, ablaze in turns.
Constellations form, light years away…
Jock Tamson’s Bairn, always have a way…
Dots are spotted, among billions they say…
Sense injected, into randomness at play…
Stars connected happy and gay.
Constellation was incomplete, a star missing…
Scottish it was, humanity sipping…
Magical hands, wit at its best…
Writes she when, swells the pen’s chest…
Words shared together, the search came to rest.
Happy she was, sad she felt…
A teacher a mother, in her all the goodness dwelt…
Light she radiates, heat she suffer…
Soon the wind blows, cools the burning mother…
And with constellation complete, its time for supper.
Written for a beautiful blogger whose words never fail to impress and inspire. Thank you @scottishmomus ( I still have no idea if we can tag someone to our post so that he or she gets a notification). Anyway, do visit her awesome blog here: https://scottishmomus.wordpress.com/
I am OBSESSED with constellation themed poems so great job!
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Thank you so much for appreciating Tokoni. I am in love with them too 🙂
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Hey i hope you don’t mind but i’d like to invite you to my blog at http://www.insanitybeautiful.wordpress.com
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More than glad to be a part of your blog. 🙂
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Reblogged this on scottishmomus and commented:
I’m honoured to reblog a poem written for me by a fellow blogger. Stars connected in the firmament – dot to dot – it all makes sense. With grateful thanks.
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I’m incredibly touched, Prateek. Thank you so much for this wonderful poem. I thought you had already made my day today. This, though, completes it, my friend.
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Happy and relieved to know you liked it. Will look forward to learn from you in the art of writing in future. Keep smiling 🙂
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Stars! They have a charm of their own! Charming 🙂
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Like beauty, charm is also in the eyes of the beholder 😉
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You are charming, as usual! 😉
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Haha flattered ^_^
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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